The Screen Writers Strike is Showing That None of Us Are Getting Paid

Right now, everyone has their eyes on the screen writers and actors guild strikes that are going on. As with many such strikes, the participants are laying bare the greed of their employers, the shady things tactics being used to try to prevent paying them (attempting to bodyscan actors to use CG versions of them indefinitely, using chat bots to try to write scripts, full-on canceling films and series from being available so they don't have to pay residuals to the people who made those movies and TV shows, etc.), and most importantly how little creative professionals actually make.

Because I've been saying this for years, but I feel like this strike is dramatically opening people's eyes to the fact that creators of all stripes have been getting screwed by production houses, publishers, etc., to the point where most of us simply cannot make a living doing what we do. Even if we are experienced professionals with a long history behind us, the powers-that-be basically expect us to work for pennies, and then when we complain they make public statements about starving us out.

I am not a screenwriter, in the sense that I don't write for television or film. Nor am I a member of either of the two unions currently on strike. However, as someone who's been making my living for years as an author, I want to weigh in and point out that these stories people are hearing about actors getting ripped off for chump change, getting screwed over by contract technicalities, or being told to take pennies and be grateful for it? Yeah... that really is the norm. Not just for actors, but across all creative professions.

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Most of Us Aren't Big Earners

If you've been paying attention to what's happening, then you've likely seen a lot of actors sharing their stories about how dramatically underpaid they are, even for iconic roles that still echo in pop culture to this day. Whether it was David Fielding who only made $150 as the face of Zordon in Power Rangers, Mara Wilson stating that she makes so little as an adult actor that she doesn't even qualify for health insurance through the guild, or any of a dozen other stories that have surfaced during the strikes, the public has been reeling from the numbers.

Because, generally speaking, we only see the top earners, and we just assume that even if you're not at the top, then surely you still make enough to survive? Surely you do... but no. No we don't. Regardless of our field or specialty, a large majority of us barely make anything.

At all, really.

It doesn't matter what part of the creative industries you're talking about here, either. Because whether we're talking about the movie stars like Dwayne Johnson and Brad Pitt, top billing musicians like Dolly Parton or Taylor Swift, or authors like Stephen King, Neil Gaiman, etc., most people only hear about those who are at the top of the heap. You hear about them because they're newsworthy, but for people outside your industry, they become the perspective through which you see all those creatives. After all, if a handful of people at the very top are making millions and millions of dollars, then surely even the folks on the lower end are making enough to comfortably pay rent, and maybe save up for a house. Just like how football and basketball superstars may get $25 million contracts, but even the bench warmers are still pulling down 6 figures just for being there, right?

The strike has put an end to that belief by bringing the receipts... and it's my hope that it causes things to change. Not just in the sense that big studios, publishers, labels, etc., should pay the talent more, but also that the public should side with the artists, and do their part to help us keep making things. Because the unfortunate truth is that as things stand, we all basically depend on our fan base to help us survive. Whether that's helping us market our books, contributing to our Patreon accounts and Kickstarter projects, or just helping us keep our views/reads up so that we can attract sponsorships, the audience is what makes or breaks us.

Because without you all doing your part, none of us make anything. Pure and simple.

How You Can Help

If you want to help the folks currently on the picket lines, here's what you need to do. First and foremost, pay attention to what the guild is asking from the public. At time of writing, there has been no call for a boycott of anything, so by all means go see movies, stream shows you like, etc. This helps make the case that studios need actors, writers, etc., and it can still stimulate residuals for some people (even if those numbers are a joke in a lot of cases, as we've seen from the checks).

Also, consider donating to the Emergency Financial Assistance and Disaster Relief Fund for SAG-AFTRA. This is the fund that's helping people pay their bills while they're on the picket lines, helping them hold out against stonewalling from the corporations. And since some of the suits have come out and said they literally plan on starving out those who are protesting, you can do your part by making those CEOs eat those words.

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Beware Repetitive Beats in Your Book

There's an old saying that if you tell a good joke, everyone is going to laugh at it. If you tell the same joke a second time, people won't laugh as hard. If you tell that joke a third time, nobody laughs. We all know why, of course; jokes make an impact when you first hear them, and after that the surprise, twist, or punchline that makes them really work, it doesn't hit as hard.

The same thing is true when it comes to our books... but when you're writing a novel, it can be easy to lose track of the beats you've already covered. And if you find yourself essentially telling the same jokes over and over again, your audience is going to lose interest, and put down your book before they even get close to the end.

Hmmm... wait a minute... have I had too many dramatic reveals?

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Don't Let Your Readers Go Nose Blind

We've all had those situations where we go nose blind to something. Maybe it's the smell of the dirty clothes hamper in your room, the garbage in the kitchen, or the cat box you keep meaning to get around to cleaning. Whatever it is, the smell hits you hard when you first walk into it. Over exposure and time, though, you acclimate to it, until your brain stops registering it as an important stimulus.

The same thing can happen with your writing, if you aren't careful.

Ah yes, a dramatic fight scene... again. I'm just gonna go to the bathroom, I think.

In the broad strokes of your storytelling, this can take the form of particular patterns and story beats that you keep coming back to. For example, if every love interest your protagonist has gets killed, pretty soon that is going to stop feeling poignant, and start to make your readers' eyes roll. If every time an old friend shows up to help they end up betraying someone, pretty soon it's going to feel like old hat. If every time our lead has sex with someone they end up falling deeply, madly in love with them (and that isn't some kind of curse that's relevant to the plot) it's going to get stale. Even if you end up having fights every three chapters, but those fights always feel samey instead of tense, that can get seriously boring.

Fortunately, the broad strokes are fairly easy to spot when you're writing a book because it forms a pattern. If a given situation occurs more than once in a particular narrative (or even in a series) that's when you have to review what's happening, and ask if it's different enough from the previous instance to keep, or if you need to change things up a bit more. This is especially true if the situations are similar, but the different iterations are meant to show how things have changed either for good or ill (relationships falling apart, a student who has mastered a particular fighting style, etc.).

What can be a tougher habit to break is when you fall into a particular pattern for what I'm going to call your book's choreography.

This is most prominent in love scenes and fight scenes, likely because you have to keep track of a lot of moving parts, and to be sure the audience can follow the action as the scene unfolds. However, it's all too easy to start using the same types of descriptions, and the same scene-by-scene beats, so that a given fight or sex scene feels like it was almost copied and pasted from previous sections in the book. And even when these scenes aren't blow-for-blow exactly the same, if they're similar enough then your audience may feel like you're just showing them the same thing again.

In this case, it can also be compared to the spectacle moves in a video game. Yeah, it was really impressive the first time you pulled out the head-snap-heart-punch-inversion-dim-mak maneuver, but after the 60th time of seeing that combo used on a character, the viewer is just waiting for the animation to end so they can get on with the game. The easy solution is, of course, to make sure that when you're going through your first round of edits that you bookmark scenes like this (or any other scenes you write that might bleed together in their descriptive details), and read them over side-by-side. Just as with the broad strokes, make sure that they're different enough that you're providing your audience with a unique viewing experience.

Think of the elements of these scenes like Taco Bell ingredients. Yes, everything is made out of the same stuff... but changing up those ingredients, even a little, can produce a significantly different experience that feels wholly unique, even if its components are the exact same as what's next on the menu.

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"Old Soldiers" is Back (And The Hard-Boiled Cat Isn't Far Behind!)

I have a small confession to make. For the past year and a half or so, I haven't even considered working on a new novel. I've been writing short stories, audio plays, blog entries, articles, and a lot of TTRPG supplements, but the loss of both Eric Flint and his company Ring of Fire (both of whom were the publishers for 3 of my 4 novels) made me take a step back and seriously reconsider whether I could afford to keep writing books like that.

The desire was (and is) still there... but for a publisher I'd relied on to just vanish right out from under me meant I'd gotten a lot of cold water thrown in my face.

I tell you all of that because the first of my out-of-print novels, Old Soldiers is back! It went live on August 7th, and just seeing this book is going a long way toward getting my creative pilot light lit, I'm not gonna lie.

Serious, LOOK at this thing!

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Old Soldiers Never Die!

For folks who want a deep dive on this novel, consider checking out the entry I wrote when it was originally published, Defunct Supersoldiers, Dystopian Hellscapes, and More in My Latest Novel "Old Soldiers". For those who want a quick snapshot, though, the story follows Pollux, one of the genetically-engineered shock troops who survived the war with an alien species called the Hyperion. Massive creatures, myrmidon are decidedly alien in appearance (ranging from 8 to 13 feet tall, with eyes so blue they nearly glow, a noted lack of hair, and no melanin whatsoever), and the society of earth wasn't made with them in mind. Pollux is just trying to find a place where he belongs, and seems to finally be making some kind of progress when he becomes the target of a shadowy conspiracy. So together with his partner Medea, he calls on the last remaining members of his old squad to root out the truth, and drag it kicking and screaming into the light.

At which point, an application of force will likely be administered.

While I feel the novel is pretty strong on its own, there's more to this re-release than a facelift and a new company name on the cover. In addition to the novel itself, the re-released version contains the original short story "Heart of The Myrmidon," where I first created Pollux, his ruined world, and the bizarre, underground city of New Liberty. So if you picked up a copy during the book's initial run, there's now some bonus content in the new version for you to sink your teeth into (especially as the short story acts as a kind of prequel to the novel). So grab your new and improved copy of Old Soldiers today!

What About My Cat Books, You Ask?

Though some folks have peeked their heads in on this re-release so far (not as many as I'd like, but I'll take what attention I can grab), most readers have all been asking the same question... when are my hard-boiled cat books coming back into print?

Don't think I don't know who you are.

For those who are wondering, yes, both Marked Territory and Painted Cats are slated for a re-release in the near future. The wheels turn slow, but they are turning! I'll be giving you all word on those books as soon as I know about them, and it's okay for me to share.

As to whether I'll be penning additional adventures for Leo, I'd like to. I have several ideas that I was toying around with when Ring of Fire shuttered its doors, taking my books out of print, and taking my last royalty check with it. However, needs be when the devil drives, and that's going to come down to whether I have the time in my schedule, and the gas in my tank, to get back to novels once they start bringing in sales again.

So, while I'm going to do everything I can to make that happen, I wanted to take a moment to ask my readers to help me spread the word. Because with social media getting more restrictive by the day, I'm going to need all the help I can get to make this happen!

EDIT: Both books are now out, and you can follow the links above to get your copies if you wish!

One, Last Thing...

While we're on the subject of new books of mine, my first tabletop RPG "Army Men: A Game of Tactical Plastic" is now available for preorder on BackerKit as well!

Don't miss out on this one!

If you enjoy the kind of played-straight silliness of my noir cat, the raccoon mafia, etc., then Army Men is going to be right up your alley. And as with anything else I write, the more interest something generates, and the more sales it brings in, the more likely it is that I'll be devoting more time, energy, and wordcount to expanding that thing!

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The Balance of Writing Space Marines

The space marine has become an archetype of science fiction. While the term often brings to mind the adeptus astartes from Warhammer 40K, the term has become common enough that it can be used to refer to any kind of elite warrior in a sci fi setting, ranging from the Sardaukar of Dune to the mercilessly-trained troops in the film Soldier. Even characters like Bucky Barnes as the Winter Soldier, or infamous video game protagonist Master Chief fall into this archetype. These warriors may be genetically-engineered terrors from beyond the stars, encased in a hardened layer of powered armor, or they may simply have been trained since birth in the harshest environments and doctrine... but they all represent a unique challenge for us as writers.

Namely that making your space marines work as characters can be a delicate process. So I thought I'd offer some of my insight on this subject today.

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My Bona fides

Before I get into the meat of this week's topic, I want to share some of my bona fides on this subject so that people know who it is they're taking advice from. Over the past few years I've penned a number of pretty popular unofficial short stories set in the grim darkness of the far future that heavily feature the adeptus astartes. Not only that, but I also wrote the novel Old Soldiers (which comes back into print today with a fresh new cover, and the original short story that inspired it), which is about a nine-foot-tall genetically engineered shock trooper attempting to integrate back into civilian life before he becomes the target of an insidious conspiracy that he and his former squad mates have to pull out by the roots.

Seriously, check it out today!

So if you want to take a moment and read through the preview on my novel (or check out any of the short stories below), feel free to do so!

- Waking Dogs and Broken Chains: These two stories follow the adventures of the World Eater Crixus. A traitor to the Imperium, he is disgusted by what loyalty turned him into. With his wrath turned on his brothers, he seeks to wipe out the mistake his legion has become once and for all.

- Blackest Knights: The black shields of the Deathwatch have bound themselves to service in exchange for wiping out whatever sins they previously committed. Some squads will have one, or maybe two, but Kill Team Errant is formed entirely of these warriors... and we soon see that their reputation precedes them.

- The Final Lamentation: The Lamenters are famed for their tears... but when a Black Legion ship takes prisoners from this chapter, they soon learn that the only thing more dangerous than a Lamenter with people to protect is one with nothing left to lose.

Firstly, Remember The Inhuman Aspects

As I mentioned above, "space marines" come in a lot of shapes and sizes. However, what sets them apart from standard soldiers or military personnel in a sci fi setting is that they are in some way inhuman. It's what separates the indoctrinated, unfeeling troops of the Soldier program from regular fighters like the colonial marines in Aliens; there's something other about the former that the latter doesn't share.

"Other" can take a lot of forms in this genre.

It's important, from the get-go, that you use this inherent alien aspect to make your space marine stand out. Whether it's mentions of their sheer size, the speed at which they can move, their unerring single-mindedness, or even the way they seem to speak more like machines than humans, anything that marks them out for your audience needs to be front-loaded. Don't hammer on it till it becomes the sole, defining trait of your space marine character, but make sure that it comes up often enough that neither the cast, nor the audience, forgets this character falls into the uncanny, even if they are still technically human.

As a final note, this becomes significantly more important if we're seeing things from your space marine's perspective. They should experience the world in a unique, unusual fashion that might be jarring at first, but which can suck your audience in. As an example, those who read Old Soldiers will find that our protagonist Pollux has an unerring sense of time and distance, as well as seeing things in extremely specific measurements. This is in addition to his body's unique need to absorb and eat certain wavelengths of radiation to maintain itself, on top of being a man of truly colossal size moving through a city that wasn't built with his dimensions in mind.

Secondly, Remember The Human

This seems like a direct contradiction of the first tip, but stick with me for a moment. Because another aspect of the space marine, whatever form it takes, is that they are (or at least were) human. No matter what genetic or cybernetic augmentations they've been given, what indoctrination they've undergone, or what horrors they've witnessed, beneath their gleaming armor and thousand-yard-stares beats the heart (or hearts) of a fellow human.

And that is where we can often lose our balance.

Speaking of the balance of humanity...

There are going to be stories where you may not want to delve too deeply into the human aspects of your space marine characters. If they're meant to act as antagonists, or if they're a huge threat that your lead has to overcome, you might be perfectly comfortable leaving them in Terminator mode. However, as we saw with the sequel to that film, humanizing our unstoppable killing machines can have a huge impact on the story, and it can add some truly poignant moments to a story.

As an example, take my short stories Waking Dogs and Broken Chains. In the former we see Crixus awaken from the haze of rage and pain caused by the Butcher's Nails, and decide he's had enough. He will no longer bow to the will of an uncaring father, or continue to fight for the sake of fighting. He sees, in that awful moment, the terrible, savage things he and his brothers of the World Eaters have become, and he is disgusted. He decides to wipe out as many of his brothers as he can, putting down the rabid dogs they've become. That's compelling enough in and of itself, and it gives us a handle on Crixus as a character. In the sequel we see more of his skill at arms as he faces off in a grudge match with his old sergeant... but we also see glimpses of Crixus's past. We see him among brothers in the early years of the legion. Not only that, but we see him as a child, bruised and bloody, willing to fight for his place on the line. And we're reminded that, deep inside this ancient warrior whose mind has been scrambled by centuries of warfare, and the electric flogging of his cerebral implant, is a child soldier who wanted to stand for something. Who wanted to be strong to protect people who were too small or weak to protect themselves.

Now, you don't have to go that deep into your particular space marine character's history or psychology if it doesn't create the effect you want on the page. But even if it's something like a glimpse beneath their helmet to see the remnants of a human face, or seeing them finally break their programming to do something human instead of something they were trained to do, that can add a lot of depth and poignancy to a character archetype that runs the risk of being too stilted and flat. Even something as simple as just showing fear, or sorrow, can do it if the jab is delivered at the right time.

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Leveraging The Algorithm: How You Can Help Creators You Love Get Seen

Being a creator is no walk in the park. Whether you're a novelist, a short story writer, someone who makes videos and audio dramas, or you just put together weekly blog entries for people, it takes a lot of work to keep making art. However, that challenge is nowhere near as difficult as it is getting that art you've made seen by people.

And while I've talked in the past about how absolutely necessary it is for fans of a creator to lift them up and boost their signal, this week I wanted to provide a look behind the scenes, and explain why the actions you take matter to the creators you follow. And how you can help them succeed, even if you don't have the money to toss patronage their way.

Because numbers really do matter in this game.

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Actions, and The Algorithm

Social media is a major component of a professional creator's toolbox these days. Sure, a lot of us will go to conventions, or appear in more traditional venues like talk shows, TV slots, etc., but most of us don't have the fame or budget for that. So most of us use social media as a way to get our work into the hands of people who like it.

Unfortunately, this means that we have to contend with the dreaded algorithm.

We are algorithm, and we are many.

Algorithms are, generally defined, just systems that crunch numbers, and process data. In other words, it's the formula that tries to figure out what you want to see, and what is going to get more interaction/attention from people on a given site. As a caveat, it's important to remember that not all algorithms are the same, and they are constantly shifting and changing depending on what alterations are being made by the various sites that use them. Because of this I'm going to try to keep the following advice as general as I can, while still giving folks directions that can actually be followed.

Okay? Okay.

So what are the things you need to do to help the creators you like get seen so that we can get an audience large enough that we can pay rent, eat, and keep making stuff you want to see? It's pretty simple, actually.

#1: Subscribe

It sounds like the most obvious thing possible, but algorithms weight your posts (at least partially) based on how many people you have following you. This is why people with 5 million followers will have their updates show up across a given website, and those with 5k will barely be seen by their own friends. So even if the only thing you do is act as a warm body by subscribing to a channel, profile, etc., that helps in and of itself. Especially when you consider that subscribing means you'll see a creator's content more often, making the following steps easier for you.

#2: React

Most social media sites have some form of react option. If you're on Reddit, it's an upvote. If you're on Twitter, it's a heart. If you're on Facebook... well, you have a slew of options there. Generally speaking, the more reacts a post gets, the more popular it's considered, and the more likely the algorithm is to boost the signal to other users who wouldn't normally see it.

As a side note for Facebook, the different reactions are weighted differently. While it's hard to nail down exactly which ones are more valuable at any given time since the algorithm is often changing, the general wisdom seems to be that if you want to add as much value to a post as you can, use the Love, Laugh, Wow, or Care react. Like is significantly less weighted, and while it was heavily endorsed when it first came out (according to The Washington Post) the Angry react actually seems to be a negative thing to have on your posts these days. Again, this is subject to change at a moment's notice, and your reaction is only one part of the formula... but if you want to min-max your engagement to help a creator, keep this in mind; loving is better than liking.

#3: Comment

Commenting is particularly important when it comes to telling the algorithm what you want to see. I've been told that the general rule of thumb is to have at least 5 words in your comments to get the algorithm's attention, but different sites have different takes on this in my experience.

Regardless, when you leave a comment on a post, it can help generate more interaction from other people (especially if your comment creates a discussion). This is particularly true on sites like Facebook and YouTube, where users can talk for hours (or sometimes days), keeping a post at the top of a group page, or drawing in lots of outside viewers who wouldn't have seen the content on their own, but whose friends are engaged in talking about it.

#4: Share

Sharing a post seems like the most obvious way to get it more traction, and it sort of is. Because on the one hand, you are boosting the signal directly by showing it specifically to your audience. And whether you have a hundred friends and family on your social media profiles, or 50K followers who hang on your every word, that is a direct signal boost that can make a big difference.

However, sharing a post is also counted into how popular it is, and how much engagement it's receiving when the algorithm crunches its numbers. So if you see a post someone made, don't just copy and paste it if you can avoid it, because then your new post will be starting from zero. If you share it from the original creator, though, then all subsequent shares will count toward making that original post bigger and more important in the eyes of the algorithm.

That said, if it's just easier for you to share a link to a video, or a new book, or an article in a group, forum, or Discord channel, it's definitely better for you to do that than to do nothing in terms of finding fresh eyes for a creator's work.

#5: Consistency

This is the step that a lot of folks overlook, or don't think about. Because even if you go through all 4 of the previous steps for a post that you saw a creator make, that's a drop in the bucket for us when it comes to actually getting noticed (barring some strange zeitgeist that makes us explode because the right people all performed the right actions at the right time). But as they say in the gym, consistency is what gets results.

So while creators are always grateful for your help, if you want to make a difference then you need to start making these kinds of behaviors a habit. You don't have to do it on every post, or leave some kind of boilerplate commentary on everything a creator you like puts out, but try to regularly boost up those whose work you like. The more often you do it, the more often it gets seen, and the better it looks to the algorithm... and even more importantly, the more other people are going to see it, and get a chance to do the same.

Lastly, I Have a New(ish) Release!

Before I sign off today, I wanted to let folks know that my novel Old Soldiers is getting a re-release with a sexy new cover, and an inclusion of the original short story Heart of The Myrmidon that inspired the whole thing! I'll likely to a more involved blog on that in the near future, but if you're interested (or just want to help me look good to my new publisher), go preorder your copy of Old Soldiers today!

It's definitely worth a read if you haven't checked it out yet!

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Beware of Ambiguous Antecedents in Your Writing

While they appear to be a term a lot of folks are railing against these days, any writer can tell you that pronouns are one of the best pieces of language ever invented. After all, even if it would be an accurate recounting of a scene, nothing that feels more stilted or unnatural than saying a character's name over and over again. However, pronouns come with their own set of risks, one of which always seems to catch writers off-guard...

The ambiguous antecedent.

He squeezed blood from the stone! Wait... which he again?

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Nouns, Pronouns, and Antecedents

As Writers points out, there are some basic grammatical rules we're all aware of, even if we may not know the official terms for them. Generally speaking, when you're writing a story, you will have a noun, and then once that noun has been stated, you'll use a pronoun for it later. The original noun is the antecedent, meaning that the pronoun is connected to it.

Jeff stared at the read out on the monitor, sighed, and pinched the bridge of his nose.

The "his" in this case clearly refers to Jeff, making Jeff the antecedent. Pretty basic stuff, right?

The problem you'll run into when you're a writer is that you'll often have multiple characters with the same pronouns in a given scene. This means that, rather than having direct lines between the pronoun and its antecedent, you might have readers scratching their heads wondering which he, she, or they you're referring to, and that can quickly cause them to lose track of the narrative. Whether it's a rapid back-and-forth between a cop and a criminal in an interrogation room, or an action scene with a squad of black ops soldiers, too much confusion between the noun and the pronoun referring to it can end up with chaos on the page.

The Cimmerian slew them all.

A tip I would recommend is something that a lot of us do without even thinking about it, but I usually refer to it as the Conan solution to this issue of ambiguity. In short, whenever you run into a situation where there might be confusion as to who a pronoun is referring to, replace it with some defining description of the character in question so that the audience can follow a clear through line of what is happening in a scene. Whether it's referring to a specific aspect of a character like a notable physical feature, or even referring to them by their job, the idea is that whenever there could be confusion, you clear that up as quickly and efficiently as you can.

"Hey, come look at this," Jeff said to Crawford. The federal agent grunted, and walked over to the terminal. The computer tech pointed at the image on the screen, and grinned.

Here we have two characters interacting as part of the narrative. Rather than simply relying on readers to figure out a pronoun, though, we ensure that we use something descriptive to refer to each of the two men separately, making sure that the reader has a clear image of who is doing what in the situation.

It's a fairly simple thing, but it's an area I've seen my share of writers develop a confusion with. So I thought I'd do my part this week to offer a bit of my own technique, and hope that it helps!

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